Two Different Worlds...Timezones.. crazy..
Seems like all the great ones out of state...
Two ends of the spectrum both illuminated...
Two paths one try...feelings hard to adjust
Mind
Cluttered
Undecided
hard to take the road less traveled by
with no guidance...
heart and soul coincide..please...
on that two different places, Usher
Thats why I try not to interfere,speed up, rush ya
Trust the instincts,they won't shun ya
Light will be present at the end of the tunnel
Just hope you can bear it all, funnel
drink up...Not drunk though...
This can effect life...but where do i go..
left or right ...how do i know...
Feeling like the piece to the puzzle..
but you no trying to complete it...just steady admirin all the pieces
til you see fit...
Pull me out like jenga...but these feelings dont fall
Cause you know when you put me in...my fit..
is better then them all...
Time is the teacher, so this lesson i'll learn
fire in this desire...a nigga just lets it burn...
Dead Men Dont LUST...
but im not lusting though...no more...
I know what I want....but still trying to let go...
just cliff hanging by the fingertips... cause I already understand..
that the ship you on not sinking....
I'm Chillin in Marvin's Room and letting Drake do all the singing..
Once you Tell me stop...Thats when i'll stop hating..
things getting to me....like Ima bust, but this not fornication...
dude lost in translation....different languages we speaking
you something else..but binary code is what im feeling..
bunch zeros and one's but realizing that im not lost...
cause 1plus 0= 1
So alone is what i am....my situation...
I am a like wings spread the way she got me open...
The Chic I need is hiding behind the door as it is closing
hahahah...
thats why im writing ...oh how exciting...life's experience the potion...
havent thought this much since
The Last Time I Met Emotion..
Wow! May I ask who or WHAT inspired this if u don't mind? This is dope!
ReplyDeleteMy Friend threw me three words...Timezones,Emotion,and Binary.... then I thought of scenarios...I let my imagination take me to the words..
ReplyDeleteWow! Really? It sounds much deeper to me. Your writing skills are amazing if u came up with this with just three words. You sure this wasnt emotion filled or driven? I'm FEELING this. See, the way that I see it, is a guy who travels, maybe vacation,business etc, and is swept off his feet by a woman who I'm guessing is taken. Kinda like a love at first sight thing. He wants her soo bad, but due to her "status", he's left just thinking about her. Wishing that it was HIM that she was with instead of her current. That's where I made the connection with "Marvin's Room". Is that accurate?
ReplyDeleteThe threes words mixed with the music I listened throughout the day...But you Have the storyline down...Thats whats up though,Glad you made connections with the music...That means I did my job well... My Emotional Pieces are deeper than this...check out my previous ones if you haven't already...
ReplyDeleteWould I be too forward or out of line if I said that I think this piece is true and is written about YOU? Like, you're the man in this piece? I know I could b very wrong, but idk, it just strikes me as something that hits close to home or something. Just REALLY feeling it like I said before. It's a great piece though. I checked out some of your other ones, but I didn't want to leave your blog full of comments. Lol. My favs so far is Moon Kiss and Lovers Express. I felt like I wanted to cry reading that one. In a happy way though. What inspired that?
ReplyDeleteNope Not forward at all you not the only person to feel that way...I have plenty of pieces where people think its me...or they question how I know the feelings of certain things...I just have a way of using my imagination to pull out the best details to make my thoughts have a real feel to it...Lover's Express Thats my most heartfelt one actually...it was my girlfriend at the time who inspired that one....
ReplyDeleteYeah, i have the tendecy to try to decode poems and just phrases and words in general but thats good that you can use ur imagination and put them into words and flow flawlessly. I just cant get over that this poem just feels TOO real to me. You're GF. Awww. Lucky girl! :-). I know if it touched my heart I can imagine how she felt reading it. U seem like a sweet guy. Hopefully not a heart breaker. Although, reading these recent pieces paints some curious pics. Hmmm...I'm a Sick Fuck....and even the recent post about the Lingering Phrases. Lol. Keep doing your thing sir. U have gained a fan! No offensive to ur GF!
ReplyDeleteI am a heartbreaker unfortunately....
ReplyDeleteI don't believe that! Not after reading your pieces. I know u didn't break the heart of Ms. Lovers Express? Dont get me to start quoting you. LoI if this really is that case....a heartbreaker isn't something u have to be and could def change. So change it. I'm still a fan. Art is art!
ReplyDeleteyup. i know..im under construction for a while..Art isnt just Art though... it has to be in you...and cool...keep reading..
ReplyDeleteI feel like your recent post is about me. Did I offend you? I'm sorry if I did. I don't get the insider, but I do apologize if I offended you. I agree with what you said rhough. I'll keep reading though! :-)
ReplyDeleteNah its not about you.LOL..its about this woman i knew of... so there was no offense at all.
ReplyDeleteOh okay....lol. It's the part about "a new fan". I was about to say well damn. Tryna show a black man some love and now I'm a joke? Lol. I'm now following now so I hope I'll be tuned in to creativity. I enjoyed discussing this piece. Sorry for the long list of comments. You have an email address that you can you reached at? I have a lot of friends around here (Atlanta) that writes and do spoken word as well and they put on events every month. If your interested I can send you the next event they will be having in July.
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